anonnep Posted April 2, 2018 #1 Posted April 2, 2018 As i am dreaming of you i began to seefinally spring came after winter all the frozen roses can bloom with love tears falling from my eye will be dry with happiness which brought me a sunshine that brightened my eye I used to imagine when I hold your hand and take a long walk where we can find a place to love under the blue sky with sunshine where i can see your eye and feel the angels are real I wish i was a singer who can sing a love song for you but i was afraid that my song willnt reach to you will be faded in the darkness where i came from I want to fell the warmth and give my love to you Dreams are dream i suddenly woke up in a nightmare I fell like i was a cracked glass thrown from a height making a loud and scary sound where noone can hear My loneliness has become my company i feel like i am in a jungle alone in the darkness where my shadow left me alone in the wood I gave my soul and truth and yet you broke and made fun of it Words can never explain how much i loved you but i hope you will realize someday that i loved you I dont want to suffer more pain lets the rain wash all the pain and suffer and bring sunshine i steeped another milestone now hope you will be happy as i am happy for you we will dream with our open eyes all we need is hope and faith
SuddenlyBroke Posted April 2, 2018 #3 Posted April 2, 2018 wow you are a real poet annonep beautiful poem!
Support Katarina Posted April 2, 2018 Support #7 Posted April 2, 2018 This is beautiful, @anonnep ! I like it a lot! ♥ I hope the real pain was NOT the inspiration for this poem. Keep on writing! You are doing a lovely job with it.
veleten Posted April 2, 2018 #8 Posted April 2, 2018 girls,do not let a poet die give your neverending love to anonnep p.s. the pain is real,true art as well as true feelings has its price
Moderator truemeng Posted April 2, 2018 Moderator #9 Posted April 2, 2018 32 minutes ago, anonnep said: I dont want to suffer more pain lets the rain wash all the pain and suffer and bring sunshine been there. done that. now im finally happy. ❤ good job @anonnep. make more! 😉
Bigmann23 Posted April 3, 2018 #15 Posted April 3, 2018 Very nice anonneps did you write it yourself?
blueprints Posted April 3, 2018 #16 Posted April 3, 2018 I think this deserves a Professional analysis and critique so i put the effort into. Your welcome Normally id only do this if u paid me or for schewlll so yeah #privileged. Truly stellar depiction of the stages of a relationship. From the heaven-like bliss feeling at the start to the cold dark loneliness and pain after parting ways, and the strength needed to move on and keep growing as a person. Also your transitions were great! It was very unexpected and very vivid throughout. but played out as smooth as a movie. But above all what i think makes this poem so impacting and resplendent is not only how personal and relatable this sounds, but also how well you captivated the lesson of overcoming these hardships and your perspective on love.
bmg Posted April 3, 2018 #17 Posted April 3, 2018 Wow anonnep that was beautiful . You have got a real gift in writing. I hope to read more from you soon
JrFromPH Posted April 3, 2018 #18 Posted April 3, 2018 11 hours ago, anonnep said: As i am dreaming of you i began to seefinally spring came after winter all the frozen roses can bloom with love tears falling from my eye will be dry with happiness which brought me a sunshine that brightened my eye I used to imagine when I hold your hand and take a long walk where we can find a place to love under the blue sky with sunshine where i can see your eye and feel the angels are real I wish i was a singer who can sing a love song for you but i was afraid that my song willnt reach to you will be faded in the darkness where i came from I want to fell the warmth and give my love to you Dreams are dream i suddenly woke up in a nightmare I fell like i was a cracked glass thrown from a height making a loud and scary sound where noone can hear My loneliness has become my company i feel like i am in a jungle alone in the darkness where my shadow left me alone in the wood I gave my soul and truth and yet you broke and made fun of it Words can never explain how much i loved you but i hope you will realize someday that i loved you I dont want to suffer more pain lets the rain wash all the pain and suffer and bring sunshine i steeped another milestone now hope you will be happy as i am happy for you we will dream with our open eyes all we need is hope and faith what a beautiful poem @anonnep before i dont want to read poems and now i see your poem lol i am now interested!
ieatkdubsass Posted April 3, 2018 #19 Posted April 3, 2018 I wish to one day become hokage of the leaf village.
JrFromPH Posted April 3, 2018 #20 Posted April 3, 2018 2 minutes ago, ieatkdubsass said: I wish to one day become hokage of the leaf village. what is that stripes in his chicks? is he a cat or he had scratches in his face? naturo is a cat now ?
rockingmonk Posted April 3, 2018 #23 Posted April 3, 2018 So beautiful it is anonep... :))) thanks for sharing!! Will be waiting for your next one.. :))
lisizpepla Posted April 3, 2018 #24 Posted April 3, 2018 it's sincere Annonep. broken love? broken love?
anonnep Posted April 5, 2018 Author #25 Posted April 5, 2018 On 4/3/2018 at 12:47 AM, KinAniK said: I Wish Dream Come True On 4/3/2018 at 12:48 AM, SuddenlyBroke said: wow you are a real poet annonep beautiful poem! On 4/3/2018 at 12:48 AM, pcservis said: nice poem bro i nearlly cried On 4/3/2018 at 12:51 AM, nadiya14 said: very beautiful!! bravo anonnep On 4/3/2018 at 12:53 AM, arteemosh said: great one Annon On 4/3/2018 at 1:15 AM, truemeng said: been there. done that. now im finally happy. ❤ good job @anonnep. make more! 😉 On 4/3/2018 at 3:04 AM, christy said: awww anon that was beautiful <3 On 4/3/2018 at 3:26 AM, Etude said: Anon! Beautiful poem! 😭 On 4/3/2018 at 10:11 AM, madcoin said: Anonn... u drunk?? lol nice poem On 4/3/2018 at 10:38 AM, clariaaaa said: beautiful poem by Anonnep . Happy go lucky On 4/3/2018 at 12:17 PM, 77kdub said: very beautiful anonnep On 4/3/2018 at 12:32 PM, bmg said: Wow anonnep that was beautiful . You have got a real gift in writing. I hope to read more from you soon On 4/3/2018 at 1:27 PM, KinAniK said: So, heart touching poem man @anonnep On 4/3/2018 at 10:12 PM, rockingmonk said: So beautiful it is anonep... :))) thanks for sharing!! Will be waiting for your next one.. :)) Thanks you guys On 4/3/2018 at 10:30 PM, lisizpepla said: it's sincere Annonep. broken love? broken love? da barat no ya khorosho On 4/3/2018 at 12:54 AM, Katarina said: This is beautiful, @anonnep ! I like it a lot! ♥ I hope the real pain was NOT the inspiration for this poem. Keep on writing! You are doing a lovely job with it. On 4/3/2018 at 12:55 AM, veleten said: girls,do not let a poet die give your neverending love to anonnep p.s. the pain is real,true art as well as true feelings has its price life is like a open library where there are many inspiration On 4/3/2018 at 12:19 PM, Bigmann23 said: Very nice anonneps did you write it yourself? yep i wrote
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